
Though symmetry can be pleasing to the eyes asymmetry can grab all your senses.
An informal ode to an uncharacteristic love
I wrote, in quiet symmetry of love and loss,
About the ineptitude of wisdom’s foresight.
One hears and sees but does not learn until one crosses
The path littered with shattered hopes. A light
glows and I divine thick patterns out of thin air.
This design will be positive because you can trace
Out the negative with architectural flair.
Your skewed beauty gives me courage to colour outside
The lines. Asymmetry now fills my life and this I find
To be perfectly in line with my girlhood dreams.
O Wonderful Anomaly, you make me lose my rhyme scheme.
Why else would I love you so dearly?
This post is inspired by Weekly Photo Challenge: Symmetry and Daily Prompt: Cupid's Arrow.
Like jazz, beautifully spun
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Aw, 🙂 Thank you!
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Anomalies are the spice of life; always keeping it varied and changing.
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I agree! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. 🙂
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So much beautiful architecture in Sevilla 🙂 Very much enjoyed the poem to go along with the photo!
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Thank you 🙂 Yes, Sevilla is beautiful!
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Mellifluous words and so beautiful:)
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Thank you so much Vishal. 🙂
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Sam, i like this very much
Big Hugs
john
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Thank you John. I am glad to hear it. 🙂
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Superb – I like asymmetry too
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Thank you 🙂
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Love your way with words. Your poems are so beautifully written. This poem makes mind looks like something I wrote in sixth grade 🙂 Watch this space!
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Thank you Jini. You flatter me 🙂 I will check out your poem right away.
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Beautiful colors and lovely words.
janet
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Thank you Janet 🙂
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Indeed! A beautiful piece of work, Sam 🙂 Love to you ❤
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Thank you Nimmi. Lots of love coming your way too 🙂
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I really like this piece. Both in rhythm and in message. Thanks.
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🙂 Thank you Betty!
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You’re welcome!
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So beautiful. A perfect piece for today. Hugs! 😀
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Aw 🙂 Thanks hon. I wish you an entire year of love. Hugs 🙂
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